Talk:Dry Lagoon

Hmm... OK, we conclude from this that the music is beyond me. I'd ask User:Hivebrain or User:Scarred Sun on their talk pages. Looking at the Sonic the Hedgehog OSV, it appears that Retro does something rather intricate with the music that I certainly can't make heads or tails of.

And while this ISN'T Pumpkin Hill, I'll ramble about layout. I don't think you need Purpose as it's own one-section heading; just lump that in with the introductory info above the Table of Contents. Appearence / divisions / versions is fine; Animals / enemies is good info to have (although there's a whole lotta empty space next to the tables - though I certainly don't know how to evade that).

Upgrade, like purpose, seems a bit excessive to give a single point its own section; maybe just lump that in above the Table of Contents too? I.E:

Dry Lagoon is the second stage in the Dark storyline of Sonic Adventure 2 and the first stage playable with Rouge. As it is a hunting stage, the goal, as with Sonic Adventure, is to find the three shards of the Master Emerald hidden in that level. Rouge's Mystic Melody upgrade can be found here - though it requires the Pick Nails to access.

Maybe condense all the Locations into one section:

• Locations

Emerald Shards - Hard

Big the Cat

This is just off the top of my head. Since you're the one working on it atm, I think you get to set the precedent, so long as it's consistent. :) Frozen Nitrogen 12:07, 2 June 2009 (CDT)

MP3s are stored on their own subdomain, so they shouldn't be uploaded on the wiki. You can get the filenames from Multi-dimensional Sonic Adventure 2 Original Sound Track. - Hivebrain 12:21, 2 June 2009 (CDT)

All right then, but if we lump purpose and story with the introductory section of each one, I think that some of those will just become cluttered. I'm looking at Route 101 for example. Any sugestions on that? I agree that Upgrade goes here though, I'll change that now. The animal/enemies tables, yeah I have no idea what to do about that, since there's a lot of space. I do have all the locations of animals for example, but it would be clutter the article if we put them under the locations part as well, won't it? Locations will include emerald shards hard and big the cat. Thanks for the music link. I'll do this now.

Oh yeah, I think it would look a lot better if the name was next to the .mp3 file, instead of somehwere in the article. for example: music: Bright Sound
mp3 part

I did it on Pumkin Hill. Looks neat. If we could include the OSV link like in the SA pages, it would be even better, but someone has to edit the template and I don't know how to do it. http://info.sonicretro.org/Pumpkin_Hill I'll do the music part for the others. If anyone thinks it stinks, do say.