Dry Lagoon
From Sonic Retro
Hmm... OK, we conclude from this that the music is beyond me. I'd ask User:Hivebrain or User:Scarred Sun on their talk pages. Looking at the Sonic the Hedgehog OSV, it appears that Retro does something rather intricate with the music that I certainly can't make heads or tails of.
And while this ISN'T Pumpkin Hill, I'll ramble about layout. I don't think you need Purpose as it's own one-section heading; just lump that in with the introductory info above the Table of Contents. Appearence / divisions / versions is fine; Animals / enemies is good info to have (although there's a whole lotta empty space next to the tables - though I certainly don't know how to evade that).
Upgrade, like purpose, seems a bit excessive to give a single point its own section; maybe just lump that in above the Table of Contents too? I.E:
Dry Lagoon is the second stage in the Dark storyline of Sonic Adventure 2 and the first stage playable with Rouge. As it is a hunting stage, the goal, as with Sonic Adventure, is to find the three shards of the Master Emerald hidden in that level. Rouge's Mystic Melody upgrade can be found here - though it requires the Pick Nails to access.
Maybe condense all the Locations into one section:
- Locations
- Emerald Shards - Hard
- Big the Cat
This is just off the top of my head. Since you're the one working on it atm, I think you get to set the precedent, so long as it's consistent. :) Frozen Nitrogen 12:07, 2 June 2009 (CDT)
- MP3s are stored on their own subdomain, so they shouldn't be uploaded on the wiki. You can get the filenames from Multi-dimensional Sonic Adventure 2 Original Sound Track. - Hivebrain 12:21, 2 June 2009 (CDT)