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==Lots and LOTS of irrelevant  information==
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==Too much plot elaboration, not enough character elaboration==
For example Sonic's 'personality' describes Sonic's powers and in-universe history more than it does his personality, and I feel the sections regarding the different in-universes such as cartoons or comics should contain mainly information about Sonic's personality/portrayal within those media. I propose this article should change majorly in order to describe less plot and more of Sonic personality and role.
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For example Sonic's 'personality and traits' describes Sonic's powers and in-universe history more than it does his personality, and I feel the sections regarding the different in-universes such as cartoons or comics should contain mainly information about Sonic's personality/portrayal within those media. I propose this article should change majorly in order to describe less plot and more of Sonic personality and role.
  
  
I (Mysterics) have started adding more personality description to the cartoons and comics, but I aim to do much more.
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I (Mysterics) have started adding more personality description, I hope this will inspire others to hae a go.

Revision as of 11:32, 18 March 2013

Too much plot elaboration, not enough character elaboration

For example Sonic's 'personality and traits' describes Sonic's powers and in-universe history more than it does his personality, and I feel the sections regarding the different in-universes such as cartoons or comics should contain mainly information about Sonic's personality/portrayal within those media. I propose this article should change majorly in order to describe less plot and more of Sonic personality and role.


I (Mysterics) have started adding more personality description, I hope this will inspire others to hae a go.